高中英语写作教学
例四：句子扩展
I see a car.
The other day, while I was walking along the road, I saw a car running fast.
Yesterday morning, when I got to school, I saw many people sitting at the back of the classroom.
例五：复合句
When I sing, she dances.
She dances when I sing.
When she dances, I sing.
I sing when she dances.
If I sing, she will dance.
If she dances, I will sing.
句子练习 1
1 ) We have made some progress.
We still have a long way to go.
We have made some progress but still have a long way to go.
2 ) The house is not big enough for us.
It is far from the town.
The house is not big enough for us, and further more, it is too far from the town.
句子练习 2
3 ) The sky was cloudless.
The sun was shining brightly.
The sky was cloudless with the sun shining brightly.
4 ) There were over two hundred passengers on board. About one third of them were foreigners.
There were over two hundred passengers on board, about one third of whom were foreigners.
句子练习 3
5 ) The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child.
Her mother was a famous pianist.
The girl, whose mother was a famous pianist, began to learn to play the piano as a child.
3 、篇章写作
英语写作除了加强词汇和语法基础的训练外，还应从语篇入手，让学生接触不同类型的体裁，加强学生的体裁意识训练，以便学生对写作目的和写作内容的结构有明确认识。
如果老师在课上带着学生一起写，边写边讨论，让学生理解课文语言的运用，了解英语的文体结构，学生自然就知道写作的方法，从而逐渐提高写作兴趣和能力。
下面给大家介绍一个写作案例，老师和学生共同写作，老师在前面用电脑打字，学生们一起说，老师把学生所说的句子依次打出来，再让学生不断调整，修改，添加。下面我们看看整个写作和修改的过程：
Travel by air or by train
I like travelling by air. When I travel, I always choose flying. It is faster than by train. Trains are slow and noisy. So I like travelling by air.
Travel by air or by train
I like travelling by air because it is fast and comfortable. When I travel, I always choose flying. It is much faster than by train. Trains are slow and noisy. So I prefer taking flight to going by train.
I like travelling by air because it is fast and comfortable. Taking a trip from Beijing to Guangzhou for example, it takes only 3 hours by air while if I travel by train, it takes 13 hours. Train travel is almost always slower than flying. Sometimes trains make unexpected stops to allow other trains to pass. What's more, You can't go to sleep with the noise. Most airlines have meal service and they offer drinks with several options to choose.
So I prefer taking flight to going by train.
对比范文：
When we go on a trip, we will be faced with the choice of traveling by train or by plane. As for me, I would like travelling by train.
First of all, the railway station is not as far as the airport so it is easy and quickly to get there by bus or taxi. Second, in a train we can enjoy the beautiful scenery of the countryside. While in a plane we can only view some clouds. What's more, a train ticker is cheap so most of us can afford it. However, a plane ticket is about twice as expensive as a train ticket. Besides, it is safer to travel by train. If the train gets some trouble, we survive by jumping out of it. On the contrary, if we travel by plane, we have to ask God to bless us. However, it takes us longer time to travel by train than by plane.
Therefore, it depends on which transportation tool we should choose. If we just want to save money, we will travel by train. But if we want to save time, we will turn to the plane.
除了老师和学生共同写作外，还可以让几个擅长写作的学生到黑板上去即时作文，其他学生可以一边写，一边参考借鉴，然后全班当场分析，指出优点，点出不足。这种做法可以课堂气氛活跃，体验过程写作，减少出现的错误，掌握写作技巧。
在培养学生语言提升方面，我们可以怎样做呢?
在展示范文中，有意识地让学生总结划出好词好句，或者让学生加入新鲜的词汇或句型，使学生敢于评价范文、超越范文。 还可以鼓励学生从高一开始准备一个积累本，从课文中、课外阅读中收集好词好句，每周定期交流分享。 Eg. The picture reminds me of a common social phenomenon that… “对......有害”： be bad for/do harm to/ be harmful to/ have bad effects on…
三、高中英语写作教学设计
下面是我们要讲的第三个问题，写作课的教学模式有哪些?我们结合高中英语写作教学给大家介绍几个写作教学设计案例。
这里想让听课的老师们停一下，给大家 5 分钟的时间相互讨论一下自己在教学中常用的方法，并记录下来。
下面来对比一下你的方法和下面的模式一样吗?
传统写作教学模式：给出题目 —— 提出要求 —— 课上完成 —— 教师批改。这几个环节都是由教师决定的'，写作教学内容或话题由教师决定后强加给学生，以致无法激发学生的表达欲望和兴趣。写作要求也是教师提出来到，在教学中较少关注情感因素对写的激励、促进作用;教师只给学生有限的时间，教师批改后仅仅给个分数使学生不知道如何改进。练来练去，就这几种形式，久而久之学生对写作失去兴趣。教师们对学生失望的同时，很少考虑学生为什么写不出写不好。
还有的老师只是让大家背诵范文。结果学生还是不知道如何去写，因为不知道一篇好文章是怎样写出来的。所以如果只是单纯让学生阅读课文、背诵范文，而没有理解文章的意思，自然很难应用课文和范文中学到的语言表达信息。因此我们提倡的写作模式是过程写作法。
新课程下的过程写作法倡导在完成写作过程中，教师使用多种活动和练习形式来组织写作教学，把写作与听、读、说以及语言知识的教学有机结合起来，让学生创造性地运用所学语言进行书面表达或解决问题。利用头脑风暴让学生有话可写，通过小组合作获取写作资源，培养写作情感和策略，写后让学生自我评价和同伴评价，把学习的主动权交给学生。学生在写作活动中的积极参与和互动，从而使写作活动更具交际性，有利于提高学生写作的积极性。
这里给大家介绍杨生栋老师写的一篇文章 《美国学生写作课带给我们的思考》
美国的学生上作文课和中国有很多不同之处，其中有一条就是不要求学生当堂完成写作任务，他们可以到图书馆查资料，可以实地调查访问，给学生充分思考和准备的余地。作文命题也很广，关注人生，关注学生未来的发展，与社会和现实生活联系紧密，并且追求真实和实用。相反，中国的学生要按写作要求行文，如所写内容必须在话题范围之内，不能超出话题，不得抄袭，字数不少于 60 字，但也不能超出太多等等。
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