托福考试作文写不长怎么办

　　很多考生在做托福考试的作文部分时，出现写不长的情况要怎么办才好呢?下面我们就来看看托福考试作文写不长的处理方法，欢迎大家阅读!

托福作文

　　托福作文写不长的处理技巧

　　第一篇综合写作需要对学术短文和教授讲座进行语意转述，要求在20分钟内写出150-225字的学术报告。能看懂听懂是很重要的，需要配合阅读和听力基础。

　　第二篇独立写作需要就某个日常话题发表个人看法写一篇300字以上的议论文，话题的准备和语言的准确以及多变很重要。

　　相比较而言，第二篇作文是很多学生在托福备考的过程中的难点和痛点。虽然托福的独立写作话题往往围绕着一些日常热议的话题，并且大多数学生拿到题目都是有表达欲的，但这种表达欲往往几句话就表达完了。因此就出现了学生常常问到的一个问题“老师，我的作文写不长怎么办?”

　　站在学生的角度，30分钟的写作就像是一次没有任何人陪伴的旅行。很多学生在写作过程中都会“迷路”---不知道接下去还能写些什么?我常常也在思考：如果我是学生，我在考试的时候最需要一个什么样的“工具”来帮助我在“迷路”的情况下找到方向。就好像我们到任何一个陌生的城市，在没有熟人帮忙的情况下，只需要打开手机里的Google map定位导航，手机就会提供几种可行的路线方案供选择。那么，在托福写作中有没有这样一种能帮学生定位并且导航的工具帮助学生在考场作文中仍然能够找到方向不至于迷失呢?其实是有的，这个隐藏在英语作文中的GPS导航工具就是“逻辑关系词”。

　　GPS=左转弯/右转弯/直行/掉头

　　正如谷歌地图会指导我们“左转弯/右转弯/直行/掉头”最终到达我们的目的地一样，托福作文中的逻辑关系词也是一步步引导学生完成文章的写作的。那么它们是如何引导学生一点点将文章段落展开的呢?大家可以思考一下，很多时候我们文章写不长的原因是因为什么?是不是因为写了一句，后面不知道还能接什么?那么我们思考一下句子与句子之间都有什么基本的关系?这些关系词是不是就可以成为我们“接下去写些什么“的提示词呢?

　　句间逻辑=因为…所以…/虽然…但是…/如果…那么…/举例来说…/数据显示…

　　托福写作中，正是这些逻辑关系词默默地将文章的片段编织成一个整体，而这一个个逻辑关系词就是我们在写作中的GPS导航工具。当我们思维枯竭的`时候，就可以把你的托福写作GPS(逻辑关系词)打开。这样一来，就会有好几个可能继续走下去的路口摆在面前。

　　因果-This is because...Therefore，...

　　对比-Instead of A, which is… ,B…;By contrast,...

　　假设-Suppose...

　　举例-For example，...

　　数据-Statistics show that...

　　当然，托福写作中的逻辑连接词并不仅限于以上所罗列的这些，只要童鞋们考前充分准备，就可以给自己在托福考场中准备更多地选择。熟练掌握运用托福写作段落隐藏的GPS导航工具---逻辑关系词，300+字对你来说，只是小菜一碟～

　　托福作文参考材料：新饭馆建立

　　It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

　　参考分析：

　　同意新饭馆建立:增加就业;提供一个好的休闲娱乐场所;贡献税收，改进社区。

　　A new restaurant in my neighborhood would be the most exciting event for me. I personally have positive feelings towards this proposal and also believe that the people of my neighborhood shall also feel excited about such an event.

　　Life in the fast lane today has turned out to be so hectic and tedious to us that at times we feel exhausted and therefore unwilling to prepare our food. We also feel a strong urge towards a change in the type and flavor of food that we eat. A new restaurant at such times nearby shall make a difference to our lives.

　　In occasions of happiness, get-togethers and enjoyment, having a restaurant nearby is always a convenience for people here. For example, the restaurant can be a convenient place to hold a wedding reception, or a birthday ceremony. A new restaurant shall certainly add lots of enthusiasms and excitements to people here and people who have the greatest amount of enjoyment would be the younger people. They can relax in a new environment with the experience of a new atmosphere and people around and most of all, tasting something new. On the other hand, a new restaurant in our neighborhood gives hope to young people who would like to make money through a part time or full time job.

　　In conclusion, a new restaurant will bring convenience to our community. So I personally welcome such a plan.

　　托福写作实用素材：做领导者的好处

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

　　参考分析：

　　讨论做leader的好处：主动，可以操纵更多的资源，获得更多;缺点：风险大;讨论做member的好处：安逸;没有风险;缺点：收获较小。做leader和member一定程度上与一个人的性格有关。另外，还要看是做什么的group。视情况而定。

　　According to my opinion, it is always better to be a leader than a follower. True leader show initiative. They take actions and they assume responsibilities. A leader makes a decision. Some followers may approve of the decision, others may complain about it. However, these followers all chose to follow, not to lead. They chose not to make a decision. That's how I am different. I am not a follower. I want to make decisions.

　　A good leader will not react to events, but will anticipate them. A leader will start a plan of action and then will persuade others to follow. For example, a class president at a local college may feel that the relationship between the community and the campus is not a good one. The citizens may feel that the college kids make too much noise on the street, litter public areas, and shop in other communities. A good class president will recognize that the community and the campus depend on one another. The president will ask the student body to keep noise down, help clean up the neighborhood, and work with businesses to attract students. A good leader takes the initiative.

　　Good leaders must be action-oriented. Having taken the initiative, they must see the job though. They have to take charge and lead the followers. They have to motivate and encourage the followers. The followers (in this example, the student body) must understand why good relations with the community are necessary. The followers must be persuaded to do something about it.

　　I enjoy taking the initiative, determining the direction, and being responsible for my actions. I do not want to suffer through other people's stupid decisions. If there are going to be stupid ways to do something, let them be mine. Would not you agree?

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