2016年中考英语书面表达的解题策略
【写作模板】2.写事记叙文
The__________ (事件)happened____________ (时间和地点), and I still remember the______ (事件).At that time, I was_________ (动词+ ing:做的事情).It was a sunny day and things were awfully_________ (形容词)before it happened. Then__________ (事件)drewmy attention. I saw________ (详细说明事件), and to my__________ (表达感受的名词)，_______ (当事人) was _________ (正在进行的动作). It did not last very long, but it impressed me so deeply that I would___________ (自己的感受).Whenever I look back on whathappened that day, I think it is right to_______ (理应采取的措施或态度一).What's more, it is important for us to________ (理应采取的措施或态度二).
【中考真题】(黄冈中考)
你准备参加学校“英语角“开展的“用英语讲故事活动，你选取了“曹冲称象”这个大家熟悉的故事。
请你根据上图内容用英语写一篇80词以上的小短文。
注意:标题、开头和结尾已在答题纸上给出，不计字数。
How Cao Chong Had the Elephant Weighted
Cao Caowas very glad to have received an elephant as a present._____________________________________________ Can Chong said to his father with kind of pride.
【满分作文】
How Can Chong Had the Elephant Weighed
Cao Cao was very glad to have received an elephantas a present. tic wanted to know how heavy the elephantwas, but there was noscale(砰)big enough to weighsuch a huge creature.One day，Cao Chong said to hisfather,"I've found a way to weigh the elephant.”
Can Chong asked a man to lead the elephant onto aboat. When the boat stopped sinking, the man draw aline along on the boat side. After the elephant was ledaway, Cao Chong had some men put stones into the boatuntil the water reached the line. Cao Chong asked themen to weigh each stone from the boat and put down thenumber. "Add up all the numbers and we will know theweight of the elephant. "Cao Chong said to his father withkind of pride.
【范文点评】
本文是一篇叙事的记叙文，以流畅的语言讲述了一大家所熟知的故事，时态以一般过去时为主，符合叙事性记叙文的特征。
【写作模板】3.夹叙夹议记叙文
The____________ (事件)happened________(地点和时间).Isaw_________(详细描述事件), and to my_______________ (表达感受的名词), the(事情)has become __________ (形容词). I am __________ (心理感受类的形容词)that_______ (事情的后续进展). I think that__________ (自己的观点). If I/we do that, ______________ (名词)will be better and better.
【中考真题】(矜西南州中考)
有一种节约叫光盘，有一种公益叫光盘!所谓光盘，就是吃光你盘子中的食物，拒绝浪费，珍惜粮食!针对这项行动，并根据以下提示，请你以“No WastingOn Food'，为题写一篇短文，号召大家参与这项活动。
要点提示:
Reason :
1. a waste of food, money
2. pollute the environment
…….
Suggestion
1. eat up all your food /clear your plate
2. leftovers(剩饭菜)·…
3.orderless or smaller dishes
注意：1.短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥;
2.语句流畅，书写规范;
3. 词数80-100词;
4.文中不能出现真实人名、地名等信息。
5.开头已给出，不计人总词数。
No Wasting On Food
Recently, many restaurants around our country havejoined the “Clearing Your Plate ”campaign(活动)against wasting food by offering smaller dishes.
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【满分作文】
NoWasting on Food
Recently, many restaurants in our country have joined ' Clearing Your Plate" campaign(活动)against wasting food by offering smaller dishes.
Many people around us also pay more attention tosaving food in their daily life. A number of people haverealized the importance of saving food. I believe it ismeaningful for us to take an active part in this activity. It is a waste of food and money if we order too much food but eat too little. And it's not easy for farmers to producethe food for us. There are still too many poor people in the poor area in China,they don't have enough food toeat. Meanwhile, the environment will be polluted by thewasted food. Also, eating too much is bad for our health. We should take action to support the campaign.
What should we do in our daily life to waste lessfood? First, we should eat up all the food in our dishesand plates. Second, we may order less or smaller dishes in the restaurant. Third, we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later. In a word, l think it is our duty torefuse the waste of food
【范文点评】
本文开始主要讲述更多人加人光盘行动，并列举了节约粗食的好处，最后讲述了我们该如何道免浪费。本文解释充分，层次分明，语句流杨，有很强的说服力。
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