教你写出考研英语高分作文的“闪光点”
作文是各类英语考试中得分较低的一种题型,究其原因,除了平时缺少练习之外,同学们还缺乏作文抓分技巧。同学们需要掌握一定的作文模板,除此之外,如果能在作文中设置一些词汇和句型的闪光点,必定使你的作文如虎添翼。
高分作文标志: 1、是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语;3、用词是否多样、准确、形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词; 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
写好一篇作文的注意事项
1. 适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观地反映事实。句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)举个经典结尾的例子:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2. 善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作为插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore / for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词、助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。举例如下:Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ...
3. 一定要学会换词,换形象、具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如第一条的例子中,applicable 替换 proper;approaches 替换 ways;implement 替换 carry out;sharpen one's competitive edge 替换 enhance one's competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)。
优秀作文举例 下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法,精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
exceedingly 替换 very;(个人认为替换成overwhelmingly更出彩)
thrilling 替换 exciting;
sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth;
google 替换 search;
an army of 替换 a lot of。
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;
Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular;
Coincident with ... 非常地道的句型,表达"与...一致"的意思,替换 With ...;
Advancement 替换 development;
Pour into (flood into / swarm into)替换 enter into;
Current (currently)替换 now;
Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.;
Growing individuals 替换 more and more people;
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型, 说某事是毫不夸张的。(it goes without exaggeration that更好)
For a start 替换 To begin with;
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法;
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动;
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides;
Deliver 替换 send。
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先There is no denying that这个句型;其次however作为插入语;再次,function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to。
Emerging 替换 appearing (fading 替换 disappearing);
Net citizen 网民,属于精彩用词。(直接用 netizen更好)
No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides;
Computers do play ,使用do 表示强调;
Positive 替换 important / good 等;