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共享单车英语作文中考

时间:2017-06-20 14:21:47 英语四级 我要投稿

共享单车英语作文中考

  最近很多大城市都投放了共享单车(shared bikes),比如摩拜单车(Mobike)、Ofo共享单车等。由于它们方便停放,骑车也能起到锻炼身体的作用,作为代步工具很受大家欢迎。但是,各地也出现了很多毁车现象,比如刮掉车上的二维码(QR code)、上私锁等。你对这种现象怎么看?你对共享单车公司有什么建议吗?写一篇符合逻辑的.英语短文,80词左右。

共享单车英语作文中考

 

  参考词汇:bike-sharing companies 共享单车公司, Mobike 和Ofo 是两家共享单车公司,convenience 方便,register登记

  范文

  One possible version:

  The shared bikes like Mobike and Ofo bring great convenience to people. You needn’t lock them by simply using your smart phone. They can take you where the subway and bus don’t go. And they can be left anywhere in public for the next user.

  However, bad things happen. Some people damage the QR code on the bike, or use their own lock, which causes trouble to other users. In my opinion, it’s difficult to turn these people’s ideas in a short time. Therefore, bike-sharing companies like Mobike and Ofo need to do something. For example, those who damage the bike should pay for their actions. Also, because people use their real name to register as a user, it’s a good way to connect to one’s personal credit.

  In the end, what I want to say is to take good care of public services.

  评分标准:

  词数在70~100之间; 如果少于70词,应酌情扣分。

  1.内容充实、结构完整,语句流畅,能使用较为丰富的语法结构和关联词汇,语法、词汇拼写错误极少,书写规范(13~15分);

  2.内容较充实,结构较完整,语句较通顺,有少量语法、拼写错误,书写较为规范。(10~12分);

  3.基本要点写出,结构欠完整,有稍多语法、拼写错误,书写基本规范(6~9分);

  4.篇幅不足,错误较多,多数语句不通顺,语法和词汇错误较多,书写欠规范。(3~5分);

  5.只写了个别句子或单词,书写不规范(0~2分)。