英语四级真题范文及点评

　　一篇好的四级作文，要注意两点：一，要紧扣题目要求;二，要在评论的基础上亮出自己的观点。下面是小编整理的两篇英语四级作文及点评，欢迎欣赏!

　　The Big is the Little

　　Nothing can be done except little by little, the French poet Baudelaire Charles once said. Most people, however, often ignore such a truth. So does the little boy shown in the picture. He expresses his worries to his father about disposing of nuclear waste, but is told that he can achieve nothing if he doesn’t empty the dustbin first.

　　Every single little thing you can do today matters. The truth has been tested for ages, and thousands of great people have set good examples for us. For instance, Leonardo da Vinci, the world-renowned master in painting, starts his career with repeated egg-drawing. Lu Xun, the great man of letters, reminded himself to get up early by inscribing the character “morning” on his desk.

　　As university students, in my opinion, we should aim high, but at the same time, we shall never measure a task by its size. All in all, only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly will acquire the skill to do difficult things easily.

　　【点评】

　　本次四级作文为看图作文，探讨的话题是“一屋不扫，何以扫天下”。这个话题较为常见，一般考生对此都比较熟悉，所以对考生来说难度不大。一篇好的四级作文，要注意两点：一，要紧扣题目要求;二，要在评论的基础上亮出自己的观点。

　　范文开头第一句就开门见山，引用名言，亮出观点，简短而有力。紧接着又用图片中所给的故事，作为论据支撑。这样以来，既避免了直接叙述故事带来的突兀感，又使故事更好的'支持论点。

　　第二段作者进一步分析深入论证自己观点。通过中外两个“从小事做起的”伟人的例子做论证，使论点更为饱满，更具说服力。

　　第三段作者从自身出发，指出大学生对“一屋不扫”应该具备积极的态度。文章最后，以名言作结，切中主题，铿锵有力。

　　现代信息技术对人们交流模式的影响

　　The modern technology has greatly altered the mode of communication among people. With the help of the Internet, people can easily contact each other anytime anywhere. However, the side effect is that many people have become over-dependent on the Internet and neglected face-to-face communication.

　　As far as I'm concerned, electronic communication cannot fully replace the direct contact among people. Although it seems to bring everyone together, it actually estranges people and decreases the effectiveness of communication. A typical example is that, traditionally, people working in the same office simply walk to others and talk. Today, however, co-workers tend to send e-mails or instant messages through the Internet even when they are sitting next to each other. As words can never convey the full message, it usually takes much more time and rounds of conversation than face-to-face communication, in which people can discuss more directly with less loss of information.

　　To conclude, the Internet enables more effective communication in some situations, but over-dependence on it actually pulls people apart.

　　点评：

　　本次四级作文形式仍为漫画题，探讨因特网等现代信息技术对人们交流模式的影响。话题贴近日常生活，难度中等。题目要求简述网络的影响，并解释“电子通讯能否替代面对面的交流”，考生需要明确给出正面或反面的观点。

　　如选择“可以替代”，可考虑从信息技术先进程度、交流方式多样化(文字、语音、视频)等方面举例论述。如选择“不可替代”，则可强调信息技术无法实现的方面，如面对面情感交流、文字信息内容传达的不完整性，或是网络技术的不稳定、不可靠等方面。

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