雅思写作高分论述的方法

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雅思写作高分论述的方法

　　在日常生活或是工作学习中，许多人都有过写作文的经历，对作文都不陌生吧，作文是人们把记忆中所存储的有关知识、经验和思想用书面形式表达出来的记叙方式。相信许多人会觉得作文很难写吧，下面是小编精心整理的雅思写作高分论述的方法，仅供参考，希望能够帮助到大家。

雅思写作高分论述的方法

　　雅思写作高分论述的方法

　　雅思写作考试建议考生积累观点要走“正道”，即：

　　1. 扩大阅读面。阅读中文相关内容也可以有效地增加考生的背景知识。

　　2. 积累同类话题的通用观点。

　　在文章总字数要求不变的情况下，每个段落观点数量越多，意味着支持句的数量就可以相应地减少。如果一个段落中含有两个观点，那么每个观点句展开一个支持句就满足字数要求了。

　　如：Charity organizations should give aid to people in the greatest need, wherever they are from, or help people in their own countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2010年1月9日A类)

　　Opponents of charity organizations only giving aid domestically, however, contend the assistance should be open to people in need no matter where they are from. To start with, it is the functionality of charity organizations to render help to those who are in great need, regardless of their nationalities. Otherwise, it may be considered as going breach of the purposes they are established for. What is more, not only can international charity assistance enhance the friendship of two nations, but also help eliminate the conflicts and misunderstandings, thereby stimulating the cultural exchanges between countries. (94words)

　　如果一个段落只有一个观点，在保持段落字数不变的情况下，支持句的数量就要相应地增加。

　　如：Some people think that foreign tourists abroad should be charged more than local people to visit a country’s cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2011年4月30日A类)

　　The reason that I oppose to the above view is the unfairness and inequality this proposal may conduce to. As is known to all, historic attractions are owned by all human beings and should be shared by people from all over the world equally and without discrimination. Once this proposal being implemented, an unfavorable impression of this country would be formed in no time. There is a fear that foreign travelers may never come again. Neither do their friends nor those who gain this negative information. And this will inevitably lead to a vicious circle. (95words)

　　因此，在观点较少的情况下，能否将观点充分地展开成为满足字数要求的关键所在。

　　其次，如何展开一个观点，关键在于是否能够灵活运用论证方式。常用的论证方式包括：解释(explanation)，延伸(extension)，举例(exemplification)和对比(contrast)等，如：

　　A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few. This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes (such as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their own interests. (第二句为解释论证)(《剑6》Test 4)

　　My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. (第二句为延伸论证) (《剑5》Test 2)

　　To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers. For example, if sufficient sky train and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.(第二句为举例论证)(《剑8》Test 3)

　　The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or traveling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. (第二句为对比论证)(《剑5》Test 2)

　　以上就是通过几个非常详细的例子介绍的雅思写作高分技巧中如何展开观点，展开论述方面的信息，非常实用。大家在备考自己的雅思写作考试的时候，通过一段时间的练习，就可以掌握这个技巧了。

　　雅思大作文如何举例子?

　　在雅思考试中，大作文的写作取得高分的标准之一就是有理有据，所谓有理有据就是道理讲的清楚，例子用的合适。下面就让我们跟随张涛老师，一起探讨一下举证的方法和技巧。

　　一、摆事实

　　摆事实是指在行文当中描述一些自己或者熟知的亲友的经历。这样做的主要目的是用一些细节向考官展示我们对语言的驾驭能力，同时，通过真人真事引起考官的共鸣。例如：

　　First, ads disturb our life. Surely, we all have the experience that an of the information about a product often interrupts our pleasure of watching an exciting film on T.V, which makes us so annoyed that sometimes we have the impulse to call the T.V station to make a complaint.

　　What’s more annoying is that you have spent money on a newspaper, but you’ll find that most of the space in the newspaper is occupied by all kinds of disgusting ads about a medicine of dealing with sexual diseases, which has totally violated your previous desire of getting the news about what is happening.

　　二、列数字

　　实际上，大家看原汁原味的英文文章会发现很多作者会列举一些调查和研究成果来证明自己的观点，因为这样比较符合欧美国家人的习惯，在可信度上和摆事实具有异曲同工之妙。比如：

　　Ad is an effect way to develop economy. As is calculated by the Statistic Bureau of China, 80% of the products in China are promoted and marketed by ads, which has brought almost 20 billion incomes as the tax to the country.

　　Meanwhile, with the prosperity of ads industry, more job vacancies are created and more revenue is added to the GDP of China.

　　三、做引用

　　引用这个词，我们并不陌生，因为我们中国学生最擅长的就是引经据典，但是事实上，雅思考试当中，我们一般不引用名人名言，除非我们引用的是一个领域里面最顶尖的权威，是众所周知的人，比如孔子、亚里士多德、柏拉图等人的名言;或者经过证实了的，为大多数人认为是公理的名言，以及见诸于报纸和电视上的报道等，例如：

　　In recent time, more and more cases have been reported in newspaper and TV programs about the surprisingly increasing rate of children’s crimes. The situation has become so serious that it has aroused great concern of the whole community。

　　雅思写作高分技巧

　　1、写作文可以想到几个点,但是进行扩写的时候就觉得很困难，怎么去扩充自己的论据

　　作文观点所需的支持论据，可以从以下几个渠道进行获取：考生自己的经历;身边发生的事情;以及其他的媒体渠道所提供的信息。然而，对于这三类信息，我们建议考生能够在一篇文章中适当进行组合，而不是仅仅使用某一类论据来进行论证。对于第一类和第二类论据，即考生自身的经历和身边发生的事情，相对来说比较容易组织;第三类信息的论据，则需要考生在平时的学习中注意积累，不是一朝一夕可以完成的。换句话说，考生平时应注意增加阅读和扩大知识面的机会，比如多读书看报，当然英文书报为首选，多了解时下发生的事件，这些信息无疑对于写作的论据收集是很有帮助的。在比较专业的雅思考试培训课程当中，写作老师也会有针对性地去归纳和总结一些论据以供学生使用。

　　2、句型不能灵活运用,总感觉句子写的很生硬，怎么将句子写得好

　　句型的灵活运用，从评分角度来理解，即写作评分的最后一个指标GRA (Grammatical Range Accuracy). 这一评分内容指得是是否能够灵活地运用不同的句型，深层次的意思理解为是否能够综合运用简单句、复合句和复杂句。在文章中，这些句子间或出现，会使整篇文章读起来有起伏感和节奏感。另外，要想写出好的句子，必须先去接触和学习好的句子。所以考生不应该闷头自己造句，而应该多看native speaker写的语言，来丰富自己的语言资料库，并加以针对性地学习和训练，以达到提高自己句子组织能力的效果。

　　心态：

　　从雅思考试四部分来看，考生一般认为阅读和听力具备大量的解题技巧，只要将这些解题技巧掌握了，提高就会很快。而口语也有一系列的应付方法和考场对策。但是，相对而言，写作却是英语(精品课)综合能力的体现，考生认为短短几个月的时间内突飞猛进基本不现实，因此对写作抱一种恐慌心态。于是得过且过,认为只要写作将就就行，自己不如把时间多花在听力和阅读上来帮自己拉分。持此种观点的中国考生不在少数，造成这样一种情况：大多考生对写作热情不高，把大量时间和精力花在阅读听力的练习上，从而到头来写作总的来说都没练过几次，以至于找不到写作文的一种节奏和感觉。到了考场上，必然会因为发挥不出真实的写作水平导致分数不理想。

　　高分经验：

　　1、有足够的练习。这个练习指的是完整地写够量的作文，不管是大作文还是小作文。雅思的作文题目(TASK 1和TASK 2)可以总结成很多种类，在培训班上老师都会为我们总结出来，因为不知道会考哪一类题目，所以每一类热门题都要做足够练习。

　　2、要找老师改。我虽然也有在备考期间进行写作练习，但一来数量太少(大小作文各自不到10篇)，二来我并没有找写作老师指导修改我的练习文章，连放到网上的论坛进行烤鸭互改都没有。自己单独练习的最大弊病就是，常犯的错误自己不管怎么改，一定是找不全的，因为已经形成习惯了。而别人就能够看得出来你下意识犯下的错误，即使对方只是一个能力跟你在一个水平的同学，找他们修改对提高作文成绩都是有好处的。

　　常用万能句型：

　　1、Nothing has received more praise and abuse than something

　　译文：没有什么能像这样毁誉参半。

　　2、There is no doubt that

　　译文：毫无疑问

　　3、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子

　　译文：之所以主要在于

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