2016年大学英语六级作文对策类

2016年大学英语六级作文对策类

　　How To Improve Students' Mental Health

2016年大学英语六级作文对策类

　　1. 大学生心理健康很重要

　　2. 为此，学校可以…

　　3. 我们自己应该…

　　【范文(推荐熟读或背诵) 】

　　Mental health is becoming an increasingly troublesome issue for undergraduates. We can easily get all

　　kinds of information about college students’ pressure or emotional problems on the Internet. Solving

　　the problem needs collaborative efforts between universities and students themselves.

　　On the one hand, authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with,

　　schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the students to ease their

　　tension.What’s more, some are physically strong, but mentally weak in terms of coping with difficult

　　situations. Teachers may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to

　　be required to make full preparation for cases in time.

　　On the other hand, students should try to face the reality and figure out the causes of depression so

　　that they can better understand it. They should also learn how to identify unhealthy behaviors or

　　thoughts and make changes accordingly.

　　【解析】

　　一、结构：

　　1、大结构：现状;一方的对策;另一方的对策。

　　2、小结构(第二段) ：三点并列

　　二、句型用法：

　　1、动名词做主语：(Solving the problem) needs collaborative efforts ....

　　2、插入语：To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide......

　　3、be to do 结构：这里表示“应该”，另有“必须”、“将要”、“命中注定”之义。

　　三、短语与词组的用法

　　1、同义替换，尽量避免过多的低级词汇：

　　issue 比 problem 更正式，本例使用 issue 也是为了避免与本段第三行的 problem 重复。

　　2、副词+动词：

　　better understand it=understand it better，但前面的表达更自然，读起来比较简洁。

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