2015年英语六级作文范文-学业与假期
作文题目：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then give your comments. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
参考范文：
In the picture above, a child flies from one cage to the other cage like a bird.One cage is named school, and the other is named cram school. What a sarcastic picture. There is no freedom left for the children who cannot enjoy the supposed cheerful vacation.
Why cannot the children enjoy the vacation that belongs to them? Who push the children from one cage to the other? What should we do to help the trapped children? The three questions solved, the above picture will not exist any more. The answer to the first question is hidden with the superficial one being acquiring more knowledge, and the fundamental one is that parents demand more scores from their children. They expect their children to be able to score more through attending various cram schools at the cost of their children’s supposedly splendid vocation. So it is the parents who pursue quick success that push the children from one cage to the other. To free the children, the parents should put emphasis on the children’s physical and mental health rather than the score.
As is known to all that pursuit of high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be uprooted. Therefore, we should emancipate the children in the mind and return the joy of childhood to children gradually.
参考译文：
苍蝇在上面的图片中,一个孩子从一个笼子到另一个笼子里像一只鸟。笼子里一个叫学校,另一个是补习学校命名。多么讽刺的画面。没有自由应该留给孩子不能享受快乐的假期。
为什么孩子不能享受属于他们的假期吗?他们把孩子从一个笼子里?我们应该做些什么来帮助被困的孩子吗?三个问题解决了,上面的图片将不再存在。第一个问题的答案是隐藏的肤浅的一个获取更多的知识,和最基本的一个是父母要求他们的孩子更多的分数。他们希望他们的孩子能够进更多的通过参加各种补习学校在孩子的所谓的.成本灿烂的职业。所以追求快速成功的父母,把孩子从一个笼子里。解放儿童,父母应该重视孩子们的身心健康,而不是得分。
众所周知,追求高分数在中国长期以来一直是现象,造成这种现象的原因是很难被连根拔起。因此,我们应该解放思想,更新的孩子逐渐返回给孩子们童年的乐趣。
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