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英语作文8篇

  在平平淡淡的日常中,大家一定都接触过作文吧,通过作文可以把我们那些零零散散的思想,聚集在一块。那么你有了解过作文吗?以下是小编帮大家整理的英语作文8篇,欢迎大家分享。

英语作文8篇

英语作文 篇1

  前一阵看《倩女幽魂》,其中对道家伏魔的九字奥义颇感兴趣。临、兵、斗、者、皆、阵、列、在、前。这九个字也是密宗忍者战斗前念的真言,喜欢火影的同学应该不陌生。意思是临敌对阵时,当勇往直前。对于考研的同学来说,你就是伏魔道士,你就是火影忍者,忍他人之不能忍。临兵斗者,皆阵列在前。勇往直前,永不放弃。

  在上一篇的《庖丁解牛》之后,大家应该对大作文的一些框架结构模式有了一个大概的了解。如果发挥得法拿到1213还是应该不难的。但是我们对分数的要求上要歇斯底里。有必要往15,甚至是18分冲一下。

  本篇中,我将结合在研究生的英语写作课中的一些技法,以及在复习GRE写作中的一些经验来和大家一块分享。并且从GRE的作文中摘出来一些词汇量不超纲,但是句式结构很华丽的句子。让大家的语言更接近native speaker。

  词句提升闪光点的七种武器——化腐朽为神奇

  这些技巧不难,只是改动一个词或者一个词组就能提升你的语言的地道性。建议每篇文章用35个,可以在文章中增加闪光点。

  1、强调名词【very+名词】

  有同学说名词的强调直接用 it is…that不就搞定了么?这里介绍的是一个更地道的用法,就是用very+名词的形式。比如:03年温室花朵的范文

  The set of drawings above vividly depicts the destiny of a flower in different circumstances. As is shown in the first cartoon, the very flower is placed in a comfortable greenhouse which shelters it from the threatening lightening and storm.

  Very一词用的很地道,如此这样的一个花朵,被保护起来。如果这句用强调句it is …that来写,估计你自己把句式结构都弄乱了。有时候要长短句结合,通篇文章全都是复合句老师也会看腻的,要长短句结合,才是最好的有节奏感的文章。

  2、强调动词【do/does/did+动词原形】

  The picture does state that they will travel extensively from north to south together with their combined legs.

  有同学问了,你说的这两个强调有什么用。强调句显得你的用词更加地道,让你文章的节奏感更强。庖丁解牛中的一、1也是一个强调动词的用法。

  3、 强调形容词 副词+形容词

  4、 定语从句的介词前置提升

  5、 当用到相同意思的词的时候,先写高级的用法,后写一般的用法。

  3~5这三条和在一块说,因为要用到同一个例句。副词+形容词?这个我们都知道啊,还用你金翅告诉我们。这里的副词不是一般的副词,而是和形容词同义的副词。可能说的太抽象,举一个例子,也是超级华丽的一句话,加到你的模板中。

  Although live of citizens has been greatly changed,there is no denying the fact that the problem of internet,with which Chinese people are faced,becomes severely serious. 随着人们的生活发生了巨大的变化,这个事实是不可否认的:网络问题,中国人民所面对的这个问题,变得非常的严重。

  3:这里用severely来强调 serious,因为两者是同义词,一个是副词形式、一个是形容词,强调的效果更强。比becomes very serious效果强的不是一倍两倍。另建议作文中尽量少出现very,因为very是一个很主观的词,你要阐述你的观点,摆事实讲道理,要客观、要有理有据。Very这个词太主观,基本没有说服力。怎么提升文章的说服力,后文有交代,先别着急。

  4:with which Chinese people are faced,用得非常地道,把with提前到引导词which前,让句子的结构平衡。如果说which Chinese people are faced with,这样也可以,但是哪个更有技术含量大家一眼也能看出来。

  5:这句话中两次出现人们这个词,如果你用两个people那你真是傻到家了,让老师感觉你的词穷了,露怯了。所以平时多积累些同义词,到时候尽情的卖弄吧。不要通篇都是I think ,哪怕是有一个I believe也好很多。不要在老师面前显得你的词汇很薄弱。这句话中,用了citizen和people,把高级的放前面,一般的放后边,惯用法。

  6、谚语的使用

  有些意志品质类的文章,如果加入一句相关的谚语会让你的文章大放光彩。但是不能直接写句子。加一个模板句型:An ancient oriental philosopher said,谚语.一位古老东方的先哲曾经说过,…有同学说西方的谚语为什么用东方的先哲呢?比如:Where there is a will,there is a way.是西方的谚语,中国也有有志者,事竟成的语句。文化都是相通的,可以放心来用。以下是英语作文中常用的一些谚语。

  7、你不得不知道的there be

  there be是一个非常有用的句型,不要以为简单句就是低级的。使用 there be 句型 ,可以将一个简单句,马上变成一个加入定语从句或者分词的复杂句。通篇的简单句、陈述句,没有句式变换的文章是得不到高分的。如何把一个简单句变成复合句呢?举个例子:

  Internet provides us with convenience.网络给我们提供便利。只是一句普通的陈述句,可能不会吸引老师的眼球。如果把它变成there be的结构并且引导一个定语从句那就太给力了。there is the very Internet which provides us with convenience.要善于利用陈述句>>there be+定语从句的结构变化,多练几遍,考试时用一次。

  五大润色作文密法——洞察细节,克敌先机

  1、多使用被动句

  因为你要阐述你对图画的观点,你不能总用some people say,others say,这样的句子很没有说服力,你自己写的时候都要怀疑一下。在一些出国类的考试的写作中,这些都是要坚决禁止的。因为这样一来你的文章说服力就差了,一旦文章没有说服力,你这篇文章也就徒有其表了。怎么增强你的文章说服力呢,就是用被动语态,当作一个客观事实来陈述。汉语中用被动句较少,多使用没有人称的主语或者大家人们,在英语中多使用被动句。在庖丁解牛中,那个科学统计法就用到了被动句,这里再举个例子。

  Computers have been widely used in various fields.这样一个被动句是对事实的'陈述,是一个议论文的标准格式。如果你把它改成一个主动句 We find some use of computers in various fields. 感觉就很站不住脚。举这个例子是说明,被动句是我们的作文中应该出现的,通篇都是主动句,偶尔出现1~2个被动句会让你的文章增色不少。在你复习作文的时候,每天改写几个被动句,练习一下,不要到考场上现想。台上一分钟,台下十年功。

  2、时态要统一

  由于议论文是要阐述你的观点,很少涉及动作发生的时间,所以写作中时态的运用很有限。最常使用的是一般现在时,其次是一般将来时和现在完成时,再次是一般过去时和现在进行时,其它时态用的相对不多。我写作的时候习惯是一般现在时,但要注意事态的统一,不要一会一般现在时,一会一般过去时,那样你的作文就彻底没高分了。

  3、高级词汇的使用

  在上一个帖子中写过一些这方面的东西但是不多,词汇的多变是考试评分标准中的一项,平时多积累一些同义词是大有好处的,这里给大家一个文档,对阅读中常见的同义词进行总结,让大家笑傲考场。

  4、避免使用口语体得缩略形式

  这个是书面英语和口语的一个大区别,大家千万要注意。比如It's,can't,what's more(第二段连接用),CEO(举比尔盖茨的那个例子的时候用的)这些缩略语都是不正式的书面英语,大家在写作中一定要避免,要写成 It is,can not,what is more,Chief Executive Officer,既然往18分冲击就要严格要求自己。

  5、书写工整

  英语作文评分细则的第一项就是书写工整。如果你的书法不好,那尽量写的整齐,写的像汉语拼音最好,起码清楚,不要龙飞凤舞的。研究生英语课老师点评我们作文的时候就说,有的同学的英语字母y和g那个勾拐得太大了,显得你的单词很乱。和大家共勉,我的书法也不是很好,最近也在练字。

  福利来啦——补充万能理由

  这个是我在复习GRE的过程中,搜集到好的万能的句子,只把适合考研的一些句子抄了出来,对于一些词汇量较大的句子进行了改写,希望能对大家的万能理由的积累有一些帮助。补充前一篇没有的万能理由。依然是本篇最精华的地方。

  积极理由

  1、*** offers extensive opportunities for every country in the world.

  2、The majority of students believe that *** will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills ,which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.大部分学生相信***会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的【这句话也是五星级的,***可以是part-time job、网络,文化交流等等,思路要开阔】

  3、Judging from the social comprehensive factors, we can safely conclude that the Internet will change the lives of an untold number of people forever .根据社会等综合因素,我们可以有把握地得出这样的结论:网络将永远改变无数人的生活。【科学统计法的有一个例子,把Internet换成文化,自信,合作也很OK了,而且用了safely conclude语气非常得体,推荐】

  4、By taking a major-related ***, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.学生不仅可以提高学习成绩,还可以获得在课本上学不到的经验。【兼职,网络,读书等等之类的话题】

  5、For the majority of people, *** has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment 对于很多人来说,***占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活。【适用很多积极类的话题,句式复杂多变,推荐】

  消极理由

  1、这里的万能理由,重点说一下not only but also这个五星搭配的用法。个人感觉很强大的一个句子,私下里多造几个句子。

  主语+ not only results in+*** but also does harm to***since***

  **不仅导致**而且对**有危害,因为***

  这个用法给出几个例子

  Spending too much time on the games not only results in failure in their study but also does harm to their health since they keep still in front of the computer and watch the computer without blinking the eyes.

  Heavy burdens of homework not only results in the loss of interest in the study for students but also does harm to the physical and mental health since the children are overworked and have no time for rest or relaxation.

  2、Never before in history has the issue of overpopulation been more evident than now .历史上,人口过剩的问题从来没有比现在更加突出。【适合一切消极类的话题,人口过剩、环境污染、攻的】

  3、There is a growing worldwide awareness of the need for strengthened environmental protection .世界上越来越多的人认识到加强环境保护的必要性。【把加强环境保护可以换成消极类的主题】

  4、Greed and a total lack of social consciousness have been cited as major reasons for the dramatic rise pollution.人们认为贪婪和社会意识的彻底缺乏是造成污染急剧增加的主要原因。【把pollution换成交通等问题是不是很合适呢?有同学说交通怎么能跟贪婪搭边呢?人要是没有开私家车的欲望,那也不会有这么车,也不会有那么多的交通问题。所谓万能理由能自圆其说就行,不必纠结于细节】

  5、Rapid economic growth may lead to an overextension of resources and lead to an eventual catastrophic meltdown .经济迅速增长可能导致过度使用资源,并引起最终巨大的灾难。【消极类的,比如经济过度增长、能源过度消耗,交通问题增多,都很适用】

  解释说明意义

  1、With the development of our society, the campus no longer is an "Ivory Tower".随着社会的进步,大学校园不再是一个象牙塔。【校园类的话题】

  2、No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.没有一项发明象互联网同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评.【中性类话题适用】

  3、An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束.【换成读书,志愿者,弘扬文化之类的积极类话题】

  4、A proper part-time job does not occupy student's too much time .In fact ,it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study .As an old saying goes :All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间,事实上,把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康,正如那句老话:只工作,不玩耍,聪明的孩子会变傻.【把part-time job换成网络,运动什么的都很适合】

  5、The direct correlation between self-esteem and success also applies to one's ability to achieve .自尊和成功的直接联系也适用于一个人取得成就的能力。【适合意志品质类的文章,self-esteem可以换成自信、合作各种好的意志品质】

  还有五十天的时间,冲刺期要注意身体,劳逸结合。现在最容易出现心理波动,随着双选会的临近,很多同学会选择一个工作保底,如果考不上研还能去工作。我当时我是一心要考研了,双选会也没去,简历也没有写。周围很多同学都找了一个工作保底,最后这些同学都去工作了,考试都没有去,这就是自我的淘汰。12月份容易不自信,容易放弃,如果给自己留后路,就是给自己不努力的理由。

  不要羡慕他们很高的薪水,三年后你足以跟他们炫耀。说一个小插曲,我有很多同学,工作了几个月后,辞掉工作回来考研了。跟我说说本科生在单位就是苦力啊,什么累活全是我们干,研究生就是指挥我们的。虽然可能有夸大的成分,但是你选择考研究生是一条捷径,努力50天,为了今后35年的幸福工作。

  不要给自己找借口,不要给自己留后路。临兵斗者,皆阵列在前。临危不惧,勇往直前,血战到底,你不是一个人在战斗,fighting!

英语作文 篇2

  I thin dgs are ver gd ,I lie dgs, I have a litte da in he . It is ver sh ,It didnt want t ling peple . But a da ,It wentut f he .It see se peple . It is ver haipa(害怕). It a(咬) t an peple ,cause disease (传染疾病),e is vershangxin(伤心). I dn t thin have a dg is gd.

英语作文 篇3

  1.随着经济的繁荣 with the booming of the economy

  2. 随着人民生活水平的显著提高 with the remarkable improvement of people's living standard

  3. 先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology

  4. 为我们日常生活增添了情趣 add much spice / flavor to our daily life

  5. 人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed that…

  6. 我同意前者(后者)观点 I give my vote to the former / latter opinion.

  7. 引起了广泛的公众关注 Sth. has aroused wide public concern. / Sth has drawn great public attention.

  8. 不可否认 It is undeniable that…

  9. 热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion / debate

  10. 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue

  11. 就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally,

  12. 有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons

  13. 双方的`论点 argument on both sides

  14. 发挥日益重要作用 play an increasingly important role in…

  15. 对…必不可少 be indispensable to …

  16. 正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:

  17. 对…产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive / negative effects on…

  18. 利远远大于弊 The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.

  19. 导致,引起 lead to / give rise to / contribute to / result in

  20. 复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon

英语作文 篇4

  We had English final exam yesterday. I feel very sad now because I think I didn’t do well in the exam. Firstly, just a moment ago I realized that my composition in the exam stayed from the point, because I misunderstood the meaning of Green Campus.

  I thought Green Campus is only the color of the campus.

  So I totally got away from the point. In addition, time was not enough for me. Eventually, I wrote some answers on the answer sheet without thinking. Thus I’m afraid I can’t pass the exam. I am now very anxious.

  我们昨天英语期末考试。我感到很伤心,因为我觉得我没把试考好。首先,不久前我才发现我把作文写离题了,因为我把绿色校园的`意思理解错了。我以为绿色校园是指校园的颜色。所以我离题了。此外,时间对我来说也是不够的。最终,有些题目我都没看就直接写答案上去了。所以我怕我会考试不及格。我现在很担心。

英语作文 篇5

  Laziness is a sin, everyone knows that. We have probably all had lectures pointing out that laziness is immoral, that it is wasteful, and that lazy people will never amount to anything in life. But laziness can be more harmful than that, and it is often caused by more complex reasons than simple wish to avoid work. Some people who appear to be lazy are suffering from much more serious problems. They may be so distrustful of their fellow workers that they are unable to join in any group task for fear of ridicule or fear of having their ideas stolen. These people who seem lazy may be paralyzed by a fear of failure that prevents fruitful work. Or other sorts of fantasies may prevent work; some people are so busy planning, sometimes planning great deals or fantastic achievements that they are unable to deal with whatever "lesser" work is on hand. Still other people are not avoiding work; strictly speaking, they are merely procrastinating—rescheduling their day.

  Laziness can actually be helpful. Like procrastinators,some people may look lazy when they are really thinking planning, contemplating, researching. We should all remember that some great scientific discoveries occurred by chance or while someone was "goofing off". Newton wasn't working in the orchard when the apple hit him and he devised the theory of gravity. All of us would like to have someone "lazy" build the ear or stove we buy, particularly if that "laziness" were caused by the worker's taking time to check each step of his work and to do his job right. And sometimes, being "lazy"—that is,taking time off for a rest —is good for a overworked student or executive. Taking a rest can be particularly helpful to the athlete who is trying too hard or the doctor who's simply working himself overtime too many evenings, at the clinic. So be careful when you're tempted to call someone lazy. That person may be thinking, resting, or planning, his or her next book.

英语作文 篇6

  As your book tells you, if you put two independent clauses together without proper punctuation, you have made an error called a run-on sentence. Another name for this error is a fused sentence. Chapter Three explains techniques for figuring out if you have made this error in your writing, and if you have, how to fix it. Chapter Three will review much of what you learned in Chapter Two about coordination. Run-ons are generally created when you attempt to coordinate sentences and don't use the correct punctuation. In addition to run-ons, you will review how to correct comma splices. Comma splices are created when you attempt to join two complete sentences with just a comma and no coordinating conjunction.

英语作文 篇7

  with all her big brothers and sisters off to school, our ranch became a lonely place for our three-year-old daughter, becky。 she longed for playmates。 cattle and horses were too big to cuddle and farm machinery dangerous for a child so small。 we promised to buy her a puppy but in the meantime, “pretend” puppies popped up nearly every day。

  i had just finished washing the lunch dishes when the screen door slammed and becky rushed in, cheeks flushed with excitement。 “mama!” she cried, “come see my new doggy! i gave him water two times already。 he’s so thirsty!”

  i sighed, another of becky’s imaginary dogs。

  哥哥姐姐都去上学以后,对我们三岁的女儿贝基来说,农场就成为一个寂寞的地方了。她渴望伙伴。牛马太大了,她无法抱在怀里。农业机械对这么小的孩子也太危险。我们答应给她买个宠物,不过同时,“虚构”的宠物每天都会出现。

  我刚洗完午饭的盘子,纱窗门就砰地被撞开,贝基跑了进来,兴奋地满脸通红。“妈妈!”她叫着,“快来看看我的新狗狗!我已经喂他两次水了,他都快渴死了!”

  我叹息了一声,又是一只贝基虚构的小狗。

  “please come, mama。” she tugged at my jeans, her brown eyes pleading, “he’s crying — and he can’t walk!”

  “can’t walk?” now that was a twist。 all her previous make-believe dogs could do marvelous things。 one balanced a ball on the end of its nose。 another dug a hole that went all the way through the earth and fell out on a star on the other side。

  still another danced on a tightrope。 why suddenly a dog that couldn’t walk?

  “all right, honey,” i said。 by the time i tried to follow her, becky had already disappeared into the mesquite。

  “where are you?” i called。

  “over here by the oak stump。 hurry, mama!”

  “来呀,妈妈。”她使劲拖着我的牛仔裤,棕色的眼睛里透出乞求的眼神。“他一直在叫——他还不会走路呢!”

  “不会走路?”这倒是一个预想不到的'变化。她以前编造的狗狗都会做令人惊异的事情。其中一只会在鼻尖上平稳地顶着一个球不让它掉下来,另一只挖洞穿越了地球,从另一端掉到星球上去了,还有一只在能在钢丝上跳舞。怎么突然有了一只不会走路的狗狗呢?

  “好吧,宝贝。”我说。还来不及跟上她呢,贝基就已经消失在豆科灌木丛中了。

  “你在哪儿啊?”我喊道。

英语作文 篇8

  My aunt Edith was a widow of 50, working as a secretary, when doctors discovered what was then thought to be a very serious heart ailment.

  Aunt Edith doesn’t accept defeat easily. She began studying medical reports in the library and found an article in a magazine about a well-known heart surgeon, Dr. Michael DeBakey, of Houston, Texas. HE had saved the life of someone with the same ailment. The article said Dr. DeBakey’s fees were very high; Aunt Edith couldn’t possibly pay them. But could he tell her of someone whose fee she could pay?

  So Aunt Edith wrote to him. She simply listed her reasons for wanting live: her three children, who would be on their own in three or four more years, her little-girl dream of traveling and seeing the world. There wasn’t a word of self-pity---only warmth and humor and the joy of living. She mailed the letter, not really expecting an answer.

  A few days later, my doorbell rang. Aunt Edith didn’t wait to come in; she stood in the hall and read aloud: “Your beautiful letter moved me very deeply. If you can come to Houston, there will be no charge for either the hospital or the operation. Signed—Michael DeBakey.”

  That was seven years ago. Since then, Aunt Edith has been around the world. Her three children are happily married. For her age, she is one of the youngest, most alive people I know----all because of an open heart surgeon who knew how to honor of his profession, and how to open his own heart.

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