六级作文参考范文及点评

　　Part V Writing

六级作文参考范文及点评

　　Directions: In this section you are required to write a composition on the topic “Reduce Waste on Campus”. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

　　1．目前有些校园内浪费现象严重；

　　2．浪费的危害；

　　3．从我做起，杜绝浪费。

　　Reduce Waste on Campus

　　As is known to all, waste on campus has become a more and more serious problem. We can easily see many students dump a lot of food in the garbage can. Some students spend thousands of yuan buying fashionable clothes and so on.

　　The negative effects of waste can be shown in the following aspects. In the first place, it makes some students dependent on their parents for money, which is harmful to their development. If they don’t learn to support themselves, they will be “useless people” when they graduate. In the second place, it is not easy for our parents to arrange for our schooling. Last but not the least important, there is no denying the fact that our country is still poor. There are many people who cannot go to university and many poor people still need our help.

　　As far as I am concerned, I should set a good example to reduce waste on campus. First of all, I will refrain from wasting anything, from food to stationery. What’s more, I’m determined to call on more schoolmates to fight against waste. Only through these measures can we hope to reduce waste on campus. (196 words)

　　本文为典型的问题—解决型文章，是老师在上课时重点强调的“旧酒”内容之一。第一段举出几个例子，第二段从三个方面：对自己的`影响，对集体（家庭或学校），对社会（国家），第三段解决办法是从自己延伸到他人和社会。另外，连接词，被动句，主语从句，定语从句，状语从句，举例，倒装，承上启下的用法等都是好文章的必备要件。

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