灵活运用第句和第句根据不同模板自由组合,开头段先讲重要性然后转讲争论,可以给我们枯燥的生活带来色彩,对于想过一种有意义的人来说抽空学习一门新技术很重要,写作技巧句子的可读性无比重要。
写作6个重要句子)
6级作文模板:
1)先背3个句子
1Nowadayswiththerapiddevelopmentofadvanced…….,moreandmore…..arecommonlyandwidelyusedineverydaylife.(讲重要性)
2Thepopularityofdigital…willhavegreatinfluenceonourwork,studyandeverydaylife.Ontheonehand…,Butontheotherhand.(讲影响)
3Toconclude,…..arejustlikeadouble-edgedsword.Withthemwemayhaveletroubledealingwithproblemsinlifeandenjoyabetter-offlife.However,onepointshouldbekeptinmindthatweshouldtakesensibleuseofthem,alwaysbeingthemasterofthem.(结尾段)
Ps:灵活运用第1句和第2句,根据不同模板自由组合。
2)模板(2个模板)
1开头段:先讲重要性,然后转讲不好的地方。
中间段:措施
结尾段:先来个小转折再进入总结
开头段Nowadayswiththerapiddevelopmentofadvanced…….,moreandmore…..arecommonlyandwidelyusedineverydaylife.However,whatworriesmostofusisthat……
中间段Firstly….Secondly…..Lastlybutinnomeansleast……
结尾段Toconclude,…..arejustlikeadouble-edgedsword.Withthemwemayhaveletroubledealingwithproblemsinlifeandenjoyabetter-offlife.However,onepointshouldbekeptinmindthatweshouldtakesensibleuseofthem,alwaysbeingthemasterofthem.
2开头段:先讲重要性,然后转讲争论
中间段:转折(即列出两种不同人的观点)
结尾段:直接进入总结(即你的观点)
开头段:Itisacceptedthat….Playsasignificantpartforboth…,andwhat’smore,alotofattentionisbeingdrawntothechangeof…..However,whether…deservessuchanattention,people’sideasvary.
中间段:Ontheonehand,somepeopleholdtheviewthat…..
Ontheotherhand,agreatmanypeopleinsistthat….
结尾段:Frommyperspective,however….(你的观点).Therefore,it’stimethat(措施之类的)
6级作文万能句子(补充在”…..”里面的万能句子,自己琢磨每个句子放在哪里比较适合)重点背:1)5)6)7)句子,最好全部都被过一遍,自己琢磨怎么用。
1)Sthwillmakeourlifemoreenjoyable,thatistosay,sthcanaddcolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife.。。。能让我们的生活更美好,也就是说,。。。可以给我们枯燥的生活带来色彩
2)Forthemajorityofpeople,readingorlearninganewskillhasbecomethefocusoftheirlivesandthesourceoftheirhappineandcontentment对于很多人来说,学习一门新技术占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活。
3)。。。。。,byoccupyingsparetimesoconstructively,makesapersoncontented,withnotimeforboredom.。。。占据了某人大部分时间,使得某人没空想东想西(充实了某人生活)
4)What'ssavethemagreatdealoftimesotheywouldbeabletoconcentratemoretimeandenergyontheiracademicwork.住校为学生省去了不少时间,这样学生可以把更多的时间用在学习上
5)Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.
一点一滴,这样做可以丰富我们的知识和拓宽我们的视野
6)Forpeoplewhowanttoadoptahealthyandmeaningfullifestyle,itisimportanttofindtimetolearncertainnewknowledge.Justasanoldsayinggoes:itisnevertoolatetolearn.对于想过一种有意义的人来说,抽空学习一门新技术很重要
7)Themajorityofstudentsbelievewillprovidethemwithmoreopportunitiestodeveloptheirinterpersonalskills,whichmayputtheminafavorablepositioninthefuturejobmarkets.兼职可以让学生们学习个人技巧,这样可以在找工作时更有竞争力
8)Bytakingamajor-relatedpart-job,studentscannotonlyimprovetheiracademicstudies,butgainmuchexperience,experiencetheywillneverbeabletogetfromthetextbooks.学生不仅可以提高学习成绩,还可以获得在课本上学不到的工作经验
9)Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningtobelievethatlearningnewskillsandknowledgecontributesdirectlytoenhancingtheirjobopportunitiesorpromotionopportunities.
10)1Sthcanproducepositiveeffectson…inmorethanoneway.什么东西可带来好影响
2Sthmaybringaboutnegativeimpactson…什么东西可带来不好的影响
SAT写作技巧:句子的可读性无比重要
SAT写作技巧:句子的可读性无比重要
很多学生在练习英文作文时,认为长句、难句或复杂句能够提升文章的语言质量,展示自己“深厚”的语言功底,并因此获得更高的分数。他们在备考复习时也花了很多精力在长句的练习上,考试时也会尽量使用长句。这种想法确实有一定的道理,因为很多考试如新托福的写作科目评分标准中确实有从语法或用词的多样性等角度考察语言质量的评分项目,考生如果能够熟练地运用各种句式写出精彩的长句,确实能给文章增色不少。
然而一味地追求句子的长度有时反而会牺牲句子的“可读性”,特别是对一些基础一般的学生来说,有时生硬地追求长句反而破坏了句子的句法准确性。下面整理了一些例子,让大家来体会一些写得并不成功的长句和如何修改的建议:
建议一:避免空洞的单词和词组
1.一些空洞的单词或词组更本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子:
Whenallthingsareconsidered,youngadultsoftodaylivemoresatisfyinglivesthanthoseoftheirparents,inmyopinion.
这句话当中的“whenallthingsareconsidered”和“inmyopinion”都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为:Youngadultsoftodaylivemoresatisfyinglivesthantheirparents.
2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换,例如:
Duetothefactthatourgrandparentswereunderanobligationtohelptheirparents,theydidnothavetheoptionsthatyoungpeoplehaveatthispointintime.
“duetothefactthat”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:
Becauseourgrandparentswereobligatedtohelptheirparents,theydidnothavetheoptionsthatyoungpeoplehavenow.
建议二:避免重复
1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子:
Thefarmmygrandfathergrewuponwaslargeinsize.
Large对一个farm来说就是size方面的large,所以insize可以去掉,改为:Thefarmmygrandfathergrewuponwaslarge.
更简洁的表达方式为:Mygrandfathergrewuponalargefarm.
2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换,例如:
Mygrandfatherhassaidoverandoveragainthathehadtoworkonhisparents'farm.
这里的overandoveragain就可以改为repeatedly,显得更为简洁:
Mygrandfatherhassaidrepeatedlythathehadtoworkonhisparents'farm.
建议三:选择最恰当的语法结构
选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要,但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则:
1.一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如:
Thesituationthatresultedinmygrandfather'snotbeingabletostudyengineeringwasthathisfatherneededhelponthefarm.
从意思上来分析,上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather'snotbeingabletostudy”,而在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需要表达的重点概念,可以改为下面这句话:Mygrandfathercouldn'tstudyengineeringbecausehisfatherneededhelponthefarm.
2.避免频繁使用“therebe”结构,例如下面的句子:
Therewere25cowsonthefarmthatmygrandfatherhadtomilkeveryday.Itwashardworkformygrandfather.
可以改为:Mygrandfatherworkedhard.Hehadtomilk25cowsonthefarmeveryday.更简洁的句式为:Mygrandfatherworkedhardmilking25cowsdaily.
3.把从句改为短语或单词。例如:
Dairycowswereraisedonthefarm,whichwaslocated100kilometersfromthenearestuniversityandwasinanareathatwasremote.
简介的表达方式为:Thedairyfarmwaslocatedinaremotearea,100kilometerstothenearestuniversity.
4.仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候,才使用被动语态。例如:
Inthefall,notonlydidthecowshavetobemilked,butalsothehaywasmowedandstackedbymygrandfather'sfamily.
本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-mygrandfather'sfamily”,而使用了被动语态后,仿佛重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是主动语态,相对来说更简洁一些:Inthefall,mygrandfather'sfamilynotonlymilkedthecowbutalsomowedandstackedthehay.
5.用更为精确的一个动词来代替动词短语,例如下面这句话:
Mygrandfatherdidn'thavetimetostandarounddoingnothingwithhisschoolfriends.Standarounddoingnothing其实可以用一个动词来表达,即loiter:Mygrandfatherdidn'thavetimetoloiterwithhisschoolfriends.
6.有时两句话的信息经过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达,例如:
Profitsfromthefarmwerenotlarge.Sometimestheyweretoosmalltomeettheexpensesofrunningafarm.Theywerenotsufficienttopayforauniversitydegree.
两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简洁的句子:Profitsfromthefarmweresometimestoosmalltomeetoperationalexpenses,letalonepayforauniversitydegree.
英语写作重要句子
一、常用于开头的句式
1.Withtherapidlygrowingpopularityof…,thequalityofourliveshasbeenconsiderablychanged.
例句:WiththerapidlygrowingpopularityofcomputersinChina,thequalityofourliveshasbeenconsiderablychanged.
2.Recently,sth./theproblemof…hasbeenbroughttopopularattention/hasbecomethefocusofpublicconcern.
例句:Recently,theproblemofunemploymenthasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthatgovernmentsatalllevelsplaceitontheagendaasthefirstmatter.
3.Withthedevelopmentof…,moreandmorepeoplecometorealizethat…
例句:Withthedevelopmentofhigheducation,moreandmorepeoplecometorealizethatknowledgeplaysaroleofextremeimportanceinmodernsociety.
http://www.oh100.com hepastfewyears,therehasbeenaboom/sharpgrowth/declinein…
例句:Inthepastfewyears,therehasbeenadeclineinthenumberofspecies.
5.Itisatraditionalpracticeto…inoursociety.
例句:Itisatraditionalpracticeforyoungpeopletobefinanciallydependentontheirparentsforanythinglikemarriageandhousing.
http://www.oh100.com …例句:Everyonewouldagreethat,althoughourageentirelyovershadowsallpreviousagesinmeansofobtainingknowledge,readingstilltakesitsleadingroleinallsenses.
8.Tosb’smind/insb’seyes, http://www.oh100.com …
例句:Intheeyesofthepublic,officialcorruptionmeanstakingbribes.Butsuchcorruptioncomesinmanydifferentforms.
9.Nowitiswidelybelievedthat…
例句:Nowitiswidelybelievedthatexaminationsarethebestpossiblemeasurefortheselectionofthequalified.
http://www.oh100.com …hasmadeanenormous/essentialdifferenceto…Butisdoesnotmeanthat…
例句:Thebirthofthecomputerhasmadeanessentialdifferencetothehumanprogress.Butitdoesnotmeanthatthiswonderdosenothreattooursociety.
11.Sth.haschangedthewayoursocietydevelops,butitsbrightsideshouldnotkeepusfromfollowingcloselyitsdarkside.
例句:Thegeneticengineeringhaschangedthewayoursocietydevelops,butitsbrightsideshouldnotkeepusfromfollowingcloselyitsdarkside.
12.Whatwouldoursocietybelikeiftherewereno…?
例句:Whatwouldoursocietybelikeiftherewerenopublicmorals?
13.Shouldweputsth.abovesth.else?/Shouldweattachasmuchweighttosth.asto.sth.else?
例句:Shouldweputintellectualdevelopmentabovemoraleducation?
14.Sth.isjustthesameas…/iscomparedto…/islike…
例句:Lifeinthemiddleofmarriageifoftencomparedtowirewalking,forintheearlyyearsspousesattracteachotherandinlateyearstheyneedeachother.
15.Inourlife,thereoftenappearssuchanoccasionwhen…/onwhich…
例句:Inourdailylife,thereoftenappearssuchanoccasionwhenwedrinksuccetoourworkinonefieldbut,atthesametime,begintodogreatdamagetootherfields.
16.Oneofthegreatmenonesaidthat…/Thereisanoldsayingthat…
例句:AgiftedAmericanpsychologistoncesaidthatitisanillusiontobelieveintheSunday-schooltruth—morecomfort,morehappiness.
http://www.oh100.com …percentof…
例句:Accordingtoarecentsurveymadeinacertainuniversity,thereare43.8percentofmalestudentsand38.3percentoffemalestudentseitherfacingproblemswithnutritionorhavingtomiclassesbecauseofillneeachterm.
18.Nowadays,aheateddebate/discussionabout…isunderwayinChina.Somepeoplebelievethat…,whereasothersarguethat…
例句:Nowadays,aheateddebateaboutwhetheroneshouldstepforwardbravelyintheeventofcrimeisunderwayinChina.Somepeoplebelievethatoneshouldstepforwardbravelynomatterhowdangerousitis,whereasothersarguethatoneshould
puthisorherownsafetyaboveanythingelse.
19.Whenitcomesto…,mostpeoplecontendthat…,butotherpeopleconsiderthat…
例句:Whenitcomestofakecommodities,mostpeoplecontendthatpeopleshouldbattleagainstthefalsehoodofthefakes,butotherpeopleconsiderthatbuyingfakecommoditiesmeansnothingbut“unlucky”whichishardtoavoid.
20.Therearemanyadvantagesanddisadvantagesin…
例句:Therearemanyadvantagesanddisadvantagesinowningacar.
二、常用于结尾的句式
http://www.oh100.com …例句:Itishopedthatweshouldpaymoreattentiontotheproblemsofunemployment.
http://www.oh100.com …,will/canwe…
例句:Itisonlyifallsidesofsocietytaketheirrolesfullythatwewillachievethesocietywewant.
3.Aslongas…,wewillbeableto…/theproblemsisboundto…
例句:Aslongaswepersistinspreadingscientificknowledgeamongthemasses,allthesuperstitionsareboundtogooutofourlife.
http://www.oh100.com …
例句:Inalongrun,thepracticeofbirthcontrolisbelievedtodoagreatbenefittothefutureofChina.
5.Inaword,thereisevery/littlechance/probability/possibilitythat…intimetocome.
例句:Inaword,thereiseverychancethatthiswisemoveineconomicconstructionwillacquireabroadersignificanceintimetocome.
7.Itishightimethat…
例句:Itishightimethattheissueweretobesolvedsoastopromotetheeconomicdevelopment.
8.Weshoulddoourbestineliminating…
例句:Weshoulddoourbestineliminatingairpollution.
10.Inorderto…,wemust…
例句:Inordertomakeourworldabetterplaceinwhichtolive,wemustlearntoliveinharmonywithallwildlifespecies.
13.Wecancometotheconclusionthat…
例句:Wecancometotheconclusionthatlivingoncampusisthebestwayoflearningindependence,andofunderstandingotherpeopleandsocietyatlarge.
15.Mysuggestionisthat…;otherwise…
例句:Mysuggestionisthateffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentocheckpopulationgrowth;otherwise,thepotentialconsequencesareunimaginable.
18.Therefore,weshouldnotonly…but…aswell.
例句:Therefore,weshouldnotonlyrealizethatcompetitionandcooperation,liketwosidesofthecoin,havetogohandinhand,butfixmoreattentiononhowtomakefulluseofcooperationaswell.
20.Whoistosaythat…?
例句:Whoistosaythatourscientistsmaynotprovideabettertheory?
三、常用的过渡句式
2.Foronething…Foranother…Asathirdbenefit/disadvantage…
例句:Foronething,someexcellentstudentscantakefulladvantageoftheholidaytoawakentheirpersonalinterestssuchaspainting,sightseeingandsoon.Foranother,itcanprovidemorechancesforsomepoorstudentstohelpmaketwoendsmeetandtogetpreparedforthefuturebytakingpart-timejobs.Asathirdbenefit,forthosewhoarefarfromgoodatacertainsubject,thereisagoldenopportunityofcatchingupwithother.
http://www.oh100.com ’tcompete/becomparedwithsthelsein…,butsthstillenjoys/secures/possessesdistinct/substantialadvantageoversthelse.
例句:Itisobviousthatradiocannotcompetewithtelevisioninvisuality,butitstillpossessessubstantialadvantagesovertelevision.(Oneoftheseis…Another…Stillanother…)
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that….Butwhattheyfailtoconsider/analyze/see/findoutisthat…
例句:Thoseinfavorofeuthanasia(安乐死)contendthatitspracticecanbenefitboththepatientandhisfamily.Butwhattheyfailtoconsideristhateuthanasiamaybetakenadvantageofforsomeevilorhiddenpurposes.
http://www.oh100.com …
例句:Quiteafewfactorshaveledmetoformthehabitofreading
四、描述漫画的句式
http://www.oh100.com …
例句:Thecartoonbriefsthehistoryofcommercialfishinginthe20thcentury.
http://www.oh100.com hepicture,…
例句:Inthepicture,anAmericangirllookssopleasedintherichlydecoratedChinesenationalcostumes.
3.Lookingatthepicture,…
例句:Lookingatthepicture,manypeoplecannothelplaughing.…
4.…。Thisiswhatthepictureindicates.
例句:ItisnotunusualforChinesechildrentogetmoneyfromtheirparents,grandparentsorrelativesduringtheSpringFestival.…Thisiswhatthepictureindicates.
5.Thetwopictureshereillustrate…
例句:Thetwopictureshereillustratehowaflowerinagreenhouseisdestroyedwhenexposedtoastorm.
http://www.oh100.com hefirstpicture,….Whileinthesecondone,…
例句:Inthefirstpicture,alonelysmallboat,inspiteofthegoodcatch,doesnotdisturbthefishesthatareswimmingleisurely.Whileinthesecondone,theseaisover-crowdedwithfishingboats,andalonelyfish,desperatelytryingtoescape,findsnoplacetohide.
http://www.oh100.com …
例句:Ascanbeseenfromthepicture,thecarbreaksstopsonthewayandcannotmoveanyfurther.
8.Itismostlikelythatbydrawingthepictures,theartistintends…
例句:Itismostlikelythatbydrawingthepictures,theartistintendsnotonlytotellusthestoryoffishbutalsotosetusthinkingmoreaboutnature.
五、图表作文的句式
http://www.oh100.com …例句:Accordingtothefiguresshowninthetable,wecanseethatgreatchangeshavebeentakingplaceinpeople’sdietovertheperiodfrom1988to1998.
http://www.oh100.com …
例句:ThechartrevealsthatthenumberofroadaccidentsisspiralingupwardeveryyearasmoreandmorehighwaysareconstructedalloverChina.
http://www.oh100.com …
例句:Aswecanseeinthediagramreleasedbythegovernment,therapidgrowthofpopulationhasresultedintheextinctionofmanywildlifespecies.
http://www.oh100.com
increase/rise/decline/reduction/fall/dropin…comparedwiththoseoflastyear/10yearsago/lastcentury…
例句:Thegraphshowsamarkeddeclineinthenumberofwildlifespeciescomparedwiththatoflastcentury.
9.Noincreaseisshownin…;thencameasharpincreaseof…
例句:Noincreaseisshownin1988;thencameasharpincreaseof8million.
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例句:Theproductionofcottonistwiceasmuchasthatofwheat.
http://www.oh100.com …
例句:Thetablerepresentsthedevelopmentandchangesinagriculturestructureinthepast30years.
12.Bycomparisonwith…,itdropped/fell/decreasedfrom…to…/by…例句:Bycomparisonwith1990,itdroppedby15percent.
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