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雅思小作文饼状图技巧

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雅思小作文饼状图技巧

  在雅思的学术类小作文中我们经常会遇到饼状图写作,不要看着一张一张的图,就退缩了,但是相对来说,这个题型还是比较容易写的一种图形,不过学生们也一定不要当做这是一件简单的事情,想要拿高分还是需要努力的。以下是小编整理的雅思小作文饼状图技巧,欢迎阅读。

雅思小作文饼状图技巧

  You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

  The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.

  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

  Write at least 150 words

  Sample Answer

  The pie charts illustrate the primary reasons that people came to and left the UK in 2007.

  At first glance it is clear that the main factor influencing this decision was employment. Having a definite job accounted for 30 per cent of immigration to the UK, and this figure was very similar for emigration, at 29%. A large number of people, 22%, also emigrated because they were looking for a job, though the proportion of people leaving the UK for this purpose was noticeably lower at less than a fifth. Another major factor influencing a move to the UK was for formal study, with over a quarter of people immigrating for this reason. However, interestingly, only a small minority, 4%, left for this.

  The proportions of those moving to join a family member were quite similar for immigration and

  emigration, at 15% and 13% respectively. Although a significant number of people (32%) gave ‘other’ reasons or did not give a reason why they emigrated, this accounted for only 17% with regards to immigration.

  通过上面的这道题以及给出的范文,可以看出饼状图的文章是很好模仿的,或者说是有一个模板的

  下面是一些如何组织语句的要点:

  1、选择最重要的一个点放在第一个写

  从范文中可以看出,换工作,找工作和读书是作者首先提到的,因为这是选择搬家的主要原因。被囊括在其他里的是不那么重要的原因或者只是一小部分人群,所以他们可以被放在结尾再写

  2、让句子容易被理解

  在写小作文的时候,应该尽可能将信息串在一条逻辑线路上,使文章更容易理解。

  在饼状图中,最能体现逻辑的就是进行对比,将文章重心放在描述两张图的相似点和不同点上,而不是将他们分开描述。

  如果分别描述图表,阅读的人就需要不断的`在两张图之间切换,自己去发现两张图的不同点在哪里。可以看到在范文里面,作者并没有这样做。

  3、语言要丰富

  在任何小作文中,这点都是很重要的,考生不应该不断的重复同一种结构。写饼状图时最重要的句子就是描述比例的那几句。

  通常考生都会用 "the proportion of..."or "the percentage of..."

  但事实上,还有很多其他的词组可以用,比如:

  A large number of people

  over a quarter of people

  a small minority

  A significant number of people

  less than a fifth

  思小作文饼状图范例1

  Task:The pie charts show the proportion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003.

雅思小作文饼状图技巧

  参考范文:

  The pie charts present the change of the percentage of the energy produced from various sources in a particular country from 1985 to 2003.

  It is clear that oil was the most dominant sources from which the energy was produced throughout the whole period, although it dropped from 52% in 1985 to 39%. Likewise, nuclear also declined, but much less significantly to 17%, becoming the third primary source from which the energy was produced.

  The percentage of natural gas, on the other hand, witnessed the most noticeable increase during the period, rising from 13% in 1985 to 23% in 2003. Coal and other renewable resources, though whose increase was less marked, rising by 5% and 3% respectively.

  Interestingly, the proportion of the energy produced from the hydrogen remained stable in 1985 and 2003, making it the least used sources from which the energy was produced.

  Overall, oil, natural gas and nuclear still constitute a larger proportion of all the sources, while other three sources, namely coal, hydrogen and other renewable, are less used when producing the energy.

  雅思小作文饼状图范例2

  The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the

  1990 s.

  Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

雅思小作文饼状图技巧

雅思小作文饼状图技巧

  Sample Answer:

  The given information shows the main reasons of lands get less productive and also shows the effect of land losing its productivity in three different regions of the world during 1990 s.

  As is presented in the graphs, over-grazing & deforestation are two main reasons for lands becoming less productive and these two reasons contribute to 65% of this short of less productivity of lands. Another important reason for lands are getting less productive is over cultivation which is 28% reason for this effect. All other reasons cause 7% of this decreased productivity of land.

  The reasons for which the lands degraded vary region to region and according to the table data, European lands are getting less productive by 23% in 1990 s because of deforestation, over-cultivation and over-grazing. Deforestation was the major reason why the European lands got less productive and it was 9.8% while two other reasons were around 5% to 7%. In Oceana region which comprised a large portion of South Pacific Islands, Australia and New Zealand had 13% decrease of land’s procuring capability and over-cultivation was not the reason there. Finally North American countries were less affected (only 5%) for those man created reasons of land’s decrease in productivity.

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