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2017英语专业八级考试短文改错真题解析

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  去年的短文改错有一定的难度。原材料选自很多年前的一本书,而且不是完全照搬,真题对原材料做了较大的改编和补充。个别几个地方设计很有区分度。

  我们先来看看2017年短文改错真题的来源,直接上图

2017英语专业八级考试短文改错真题解析

2017英语专业八级考试短文改错真题解析

  PARTIII LANGUAGE USAGE [15 MIN] 10%

  The passage contains TEN errors.Each indicated line contains a maximum of ONE error. In each case only ONE wordis involved. You should proofread the passage and correct it in the followingway.

  Fora wrong word, underline the wrong word and write thecorrect on in the blank

  For a missingword, mark the position ofthe missing word with “^” sign and write the correct on in the blank

  For an unnecessary word, cross the unnecessary word the slash“/” and out the word in the blank

  Proofread the given passage on ANSWER SHEET THREEas instructed.

  2017 年英语专业八级统一考试 真题及解析

  PART III LANGUAGE USAGE [15 MIN] 10%

  The passage contains TEN errors. Each indicated line contains a maximum of ONE error. In each

  case only ONE word is involved. You should proofread the passage and correct it in the following

  way.

  For a wrong word, underline the wrong word and write the correct on in the blank

  For a missing word, mark the position of the missing word with “^” sign and write the

  correct on in the blank

  For an unnecessary word, cross the unnecessary word the slash “/” and out the word in the blank

  Proofread the given passage on ANSWER SHEET THREE as instructed.

  The ability to communicate is the primary factor that distinguish human

  beings from animals. And it is the ability to communicate well which

  distinguishes one individual from another.

  The fact is that apart from the basic necessi t ies, one needs to

  be equipped with habits for good communication skills, thus this is

  what will make one a happy and successful social being.

  In order to develop these habits, one need to first acknowledge

  the fact that they need to improve communication skills from time to time.

  They need to take stock of the way how they interact and the direction

  in which their work and personal relations are going. The only constant

  in l ife is change, the more one accepts one’s strengths and works

  towards deal ing wi th their shor tcomings, special ly in the area of

  communica t ion ski l l s , the be t ter wi l l be the i r interact ions and

  the more their social popularity.

  To dominated quest ion that comes here is: How to improve

  c ommu n i c a t i o n s k i l l s ? Th e a n swe r i s s imp l e . On e c a n f i n d

  plenty of l i terature on this. There are also exper ts, who conduct

  workshops and seminar s based on communicat ion ski l ls of men

  and women. In fact , a large number of companies are bringing in

  t ra ine r s to regula r ly make se s s ions on the subject , in order to

  help their work force maintain better interpersonal work relat ions.

  Today effective communication skills have become a predominant factor

  even whi le recrui t ing employees . Whi le interviewing candidates,

  most interviewers judge them on the basis of the skills they communicate with.

  They believe that some skills can be improvised on the job; but ability to

  communicate wel l is impor tant , as every employee becomes the

  representing face of the company.

  There are trainers, who special ized in del ivering custom-made

  programs on the subject. Through the sessions they not only facilitate

  bet ter communicat ion ski l ls in the workplace, but also look into

  the problems in the manner of being able to convey messages effectively.

  (1) _______

  (2) ______

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  (6) _______

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  【解析与参考答案】

  1. 将 which改为that。这里的句型是强调句“it is…… that……”;

  2. 将 thus改为as或者because。后一小句是原因,不是结果。

  3. 去掉how。“the way”后可以直接用状语从句。“how”已经有“the way of”的语法意义,

  相当于“in a way or manner”.

  4. 在 the more前面加上连接词 and。两个小句之间缺少表示承接关系的连接词。

  5. 将 specially改为especially。这句插入语是表示特别列举,副词当然用especially.

  6. 将 dominated改为dominating。这样-ing分词形式和 question的逻辑关系才对。

  7. make改为 have或者 deliver。“have / deliver sessions”指上课、开会等,搭配合理。

  8. ability前面加定冠词 the,以此表示定指。

  9. 两种改法。 (1)将specialized 改为specialize。 (2)在who和 specialized之间加上系动词

  are。我个人觉得第一种改法更自然些。

  10. 将 problems改为problem。“look into the problem”是使用频率高的搭配(根据语料库检

  索) ,这一句中的“in the manner of doing”语义上也合适,有同学可能改为“in a manner

  of doing” ;但英语的实际使用中常见的是“in a manner of speaking”,很少有其他形式。